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Student Name 2: Chris http://chrispapamedia.blogspot.co.uk/	How To Improve
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Front Cover: level 3 mark 47            Producing material appropriate for the target audience            Understanding of conventions of layouts and page design            Showing awareness of the need for variety in fonts and text size          Accurate use of language and register            Manipulation of photographs Contents Page: level 3 mark 47           Producing material appropriate for the target audience            Understanding of conventions of layouts and page design           Showing awareness of the need for variety in fonts and text size           Accurate use of language and register            Manipulation of photographs	How to improve: *        Make the issue title and price a bit more eye catching. *        Make the words in the yellow splash bubble fit. *        Your bar code is cut off.	How to improve: *        Add links to your social sites and website at the bottom. *        Make more space between each heading and page title. *        Fill the bottom with something